What you should not include in a Cover Letter



Here is a list of things that you should NOT include in your cover letter:
Typos or Factual Errors      
    Ø  You should always spellcheck your cover letter. It's even better to get someone else to read it and point out any mistakes or confusing things. People you can ask include friends, family members, your careers teacher or a careers counsellor at your university or TAFE.
    Ø  Double-check everything in your cover letter. If you mention a company's name, make sure you get it right. If you mention places you've worked before, make sure you get their names right too. Mistakes on cover letters are worse than typos.
Your Entire Resume

    Ø  Don't cut and paste your resume into your cover letter. Try to re-word the information on your resume rather than just repeating it. Keep your cover letter short and let your resume tell the whole story.
    Ø  Using "I" Too Much. Try to make sure that you don't fill your cover letter with things like "I believe", "I have" and "I am". Once you've written your letter, look over it and see if you can take out - or rewrite - any sentences that start with "I".
    Ø  Don't Mention Your Other Job Applications

You'll probably have more than one job application on the go at any one time. It's important, though, not to mention other job applications. You're trying to convince people you really want the job - it's hard to do that if they know you're looking for other jobs as well.

Even though most people assume you aren't only applying for one job at a time, it's best if you act as though you are.
Cover Letters for When There's No Job Advertised
Sometimes you might want to work for a particular business or organization even though there haven't been any specific jobs advertised. Contacting these businesses directly to ask if they have any jobs available is a perfectly legitimate thing to do. It can show a high level of motivation and enthusiasm, and could even lead to a job.

Even if there's no job currently available, there's a chance they could keep your details on file and get in touch with you when a job does become available.

This kind of cover letter should be written in the same way as a general cover letter, but with a few differences. You need to:

Ø  Show you've researched the organization or business and know about what it does
Ø  Mention why you're interested in working for them (in terms of what they do and your own long-term goals)
Ø  Show how your skills, experience and interest fit in with the goals of the business or organization
Ø  Indicate what you're hoping to get out of contacting them - do you want to know about positions currently available or to speak to someone about what it's like to work there?
Ø  Finish the letter by saying that you'll contact them in a couple of weeks, but that you're happy to talk to them if they want to contact you before that

If you haven't heard back in a couple of weeks, it's okay for you to contact them to ask for a response - try emailing them or calling them to discuss your letter directly.


Email Cover Letters

Sometimes you'll be asked to send your cover letter as an email instead of a separate document. If this is the case you should:

Ø  Write your name and the job title in the email subject line (e.g., " Ahmed Ali” - Application for Administration Assistant role")
Ø  Remember you still need to use the name of the person you're writing to
Ø  Avoid formatting the body of the email like a traditional letter - leave out the contact details (yours and theirs) and just go straight to the "Dear XXXX" part.
Ø  End the email with a professional signature that includes your phone number
Ø  Always send the email from a professional looking email address

What to Do When Only A Cover Letter is Requested

Some organizations may specifically ask you to respond to requirements of the job in a one-page cover letter instead of submitting a resume.

When this happens it's important to link your experience to the job's requirements in your cover letter. When writing this kind of cover letter you should:

Ø  Include contact details (yours and theirs), a reference line and a brief introduction to yourself, as advised in "What to Include in Your Cover Letter", above
Ø  Briefly summarise your experience
Ø  Use bullet points (one bullet for each requirement of the job) to clearly outline a) each requirement and b) how you meet it (each point should be 2 lines maximum)
Ø  Conclude by asking them to contact you, as advised in "What to Include in Your Cover Letter", above

Ø  Check out our Applying with a Cover Letter Only template for examples of how to write this kind of cover letter.


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